My narrative so far:

All right lets go! Huh Huh Huh! “Is this really necessary?” Whispered Bob “I know for one I’m not to fond of the idea, responded Eddie in a nervous tone. The 3 men, Bob, Jeb and Eddie were getting ready to go on a potentially 2 month expedition. searching the deeps. They tried to concentrate on the what the future might bring, But all they could hear was the bellowing sound of the U.S. Army instructors terrifying voice echoing across the bridge. The shark face on the front of the SUB taunted them and warned them of what's to come.